2008/01/30

Writing Clinic

Topic: Color!
I chose a red card because red is lucky in Taiwan and China. We usually use this color on Chinese New Year and for any traditional festival. For example, every family hangs a long red paper on the door and writes some lucky sentences on the red paper. People usually put money into a red envelope and give it to children and the elderly. Chinese New Year is next week so I miss my family now even more.


今天的Writing Clinic也很有趣

是任選一張桌上的色卡

然後作文

我挑了鮮紅色的一張

整個是吉祥如意的大紅色!

1 則留言:

匿名 提到...

寫的不錯嗎~~~
雖然我都看的懂
但也不一定寫的出來~~~

加油啦!!!!



by the way
我覺得你有寫for example的時候
後面就可以接~first,second ,third...

降感覺段落會明顯些,
對你的舉例也比較有幫助...



ps~小建議囉!!!以前老師教的~